Good morning Greg. I enjoyed this amazing day yesterday. Raining all day. Nothing pressing that HAD to be done. So I treated myself to a Medium read-a-thon. By the time I got to your story I was reading for hours. I tell you this because I think that is why I started reading your story before checking out the definition of your title. ( that and my curiosity around your build-a-book ). Had I been on Amazon or in a physical bookstore, absolutely I would have checked further and your title would have been my reason not to purchase. I do thank you for your response earlier about where the book and characters are headed. But for me, and I am speaking for myself only, I cannot get past the title. ( as an aside yet related to the concept of M.I.L.K. , I have always disliked the M.I.L.F. expression because of the way it perpetuates the societal treatment of women). Greg, I debated with myself a lot about whether I should get back to you or just stop reading and communicating. Yet you asked for feedback, so I thought I should respectfully write one more time instead of turning into a ghost. Please know that my feedback comes with all good intentions and I wish you well.